|Reviews for Too close for comfort|
| Scorpiongurl324 12/2/08 . chapter 15
Hi, I just started ur story yesturday and couldn't wait to finish it! It's awesome! I love it! Update soon!
| MidnyghtVampyrezz 12/2/08 . chapter 15
Oh my gosh I absolutly love this! This is a very good idea and has kept me on the edge of my seat all day! (literally) I've been reading this off my iPod during school today and cannot wait for the next update!
| Kimberlli 12/2/08 . chapter 15
Though you take a lot of time updating..
BUT YOU'RE STILL AWESOME!
I have been waiting for this for so long... (well maybe not THAT long, but long enough for my pacience level ((which is not a lot)) to finish..)
Anyways, it was great ) Dirty.. but GREAT!
I'm making a fanclub for Shane TOO! XD
And for Sawyer! D
& Harry of course... )
Ok... I got to go now.. IT WAS MY PLEASURE to read this..!
I AM waiting for the next update..P
| XxNoImaginationxX 12/2/08 . chapter 6
I'm loving the story line so far, the only thing is, and no offense to your beta, but they are missing some errors here and there. I would point them out but I have a really bad memory and can't remember.
Anyways, great story :D
| Hypa To Hell And Back 12/2/08 . chapter 15
Hi hun. This is good. It gets better and better everytime I read it. i know i am being a horrible ditz and not betaing it for you. i am over sorry for that but i have been over busy for ages. i swear when i have some time i will sort this out for i promise. i have reread this one and i was wondering why it took you so long to update but that isnt my business so...yeah.
this was really good. actually it made a lot of sense compere to the first chapter when i first read it _ love you!. any way there was only a few errors which i promise i will fix...oh and i will look back at the previous chapters and see if they need changing. i also get a another quick read _
yeah i am insane but you love me.
again i am over sorry for not editing it and i will do it. just millions of home wrok to do.
please pkease put the next chappie please!
| Kimberlli 11/7/08 . chapter 1
Just asking here girl :p When are you posting again...? NO pressure of course JUST ASKING ;p...:D
| Karito 10/11/08 . chapter 14
Maggie! My dearest girly! I love this, you know it. Shane is perfect even when he doesn't appears. I want a Shane for myself. Or a Sawyer. Or even a Mike. Or a Link! Yes, I want a Link. Link is hot just picture Karo drooling.
Well, update soon, please!
I want to see what the hell Shane's thinking when he sees Lyra half naked hint hint
| WriterGurl123 10/11/08 . chapter 14
I love it! The whole chapter was filled with crazy situations and it's about to get even crazier!
| under the bed 10/7/08 . chapter 14
The lace one kinda reminded me of my friend's costume as Bloody Mary... Guess that doesn't make much sense, though.
| Kimberlli 10/7/08 . chapter 14
No Shane's kiss this time? nThat doesn't make me feel so well..
But I'll live
I justr read the whole freaking story, I SWEAR my whole family is now SURE that I'm mental, since I kept laughing and talking to the freaking computer, (see I tend to do that a lot, 2 reasons, 1 I like mocking things, bad habit, haven't been able to take it off, sad thing is when it is while I'm watching TV or reading I do it out loud, so yeah you imagine a girl sitting in front of hr computer seriously mocking the screen every freaking minute, yeah hilarious for some and for my family, well thoughts of me in a phyqiatrist (( oh and excuse my bad spelling or grammar, I'm not really american, well I am, but not exactly from the united states but from Panama, you know the tiny little latin country that's pressed in between Colombia and Costa Rica, yeach that one, so sometimes I can not really spell some words)) and well number 2 I love to talk in english for that matter so I mock the characters in english, and I'm latin, means I talk spanish, means my family does not understand what I'm saying most of the time, more reasons to think I'm mental, which I probably am.. so yeahh) but I think they'll get over it.
Other than that this is an amazing story and I'm looking forward for more :D
| Kayla 10/7/08 . chapter 14
Good work as always. You know you are one of my favourite authors.
I don't think I need to tell you who I want Lyra to be with. :) I'll let you guess! I really don't want Lyra to be with some other boy even for a few chapters. But it's your story so you know better.
I like Lyra's friends and I have a feeling I will like Danny. Although I won't like him as much as Shane of course :)
It's a bit difficult to imagine Shane having a female best friend. But she is kind and I like her.
| MySweetFears 10/6/08 . chapter 14
yay an update! i love this story. it just freeking amazing! cant wait for the banquet. for the next chap i dont know if i want lyra POV or shanes. maybe we could have both?;)
oh and thats a hell yes to having the pics posted up. i really want to see what they are wearing and the photos help to visualize. cant wait for the next chap!
| jenjen-0 10/2/08 . chapter 13
Wow, an update! She defo has to end up with Shane...and no other guys, all she needs is him :P
| Wheresmyprince 9/30/08 . chapter 13
No way shane all the way.
I really like this chapter can't wait for you to update, hopefully it won't take as long ;]
| Hypa To Hell And Back 9/30/08 . chapter 13
hehe my lovely maggie...i just remembered that i haven't editted it i am so sorry in fact i havnt mail you in ages god i feel so bad. hehe love you really. like i said before i like this chapter but i love the ending more. really good hun.
i want more!