"my air caused your lungs to swell like warm balloons
that sang drumbeats as they grew
and knew the Morse code of my walk."

Perfect.

God, this is amazing. I'm always blown away by what you have to say. I love talking about skin and teeth in this; they're such great images/objects to work with. The body as a whole can be shaped into so many fantastic ideas in poetry. I love it. This is elegant and sophisticated, mature. Really nicely done. Keep writing! :)

This poem is amazing. Verbose and dripping with beautiful phrases about the technological aspects of creation--as mankind would understand it in the modern age. "In my imaginary situations/ my air caused your lungs to swell like warm balloons/ that sang the drumbeats as they grew/ and knew the Morse code of my walk." That is what I call good poetry!