Reviews for The Heart is No More

lovelesspoet93 2008-03-03 ch 1,	abusewow pooks that was really good i would have to say that one is my favorite i def. like a the rhymes and how is just flows
Take the Money and Run 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, this poem is really amazing! i like how halfway through the poem you start describing the emotions that the rips and tears come from, and needless to say it flowed brilliantly! the only line that seemed a bit off was "it, through, has been worn." somehow, the rhyme still doesnt seem forced but the line doesnt fit the flow as well. Still, i really like this and i hope you decide to put more up soon! By the way i read your profile and i must say i agree with your hatred of people who are unusually obsessed with Hannah Montana...
writingxonxwalls 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseYou know how I feel about this. Actually, our whole English class knows how I feel about this. I PROCLAIMED IT TO THE WORLD! I less than three'd it.
randompoetry 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseGREAT imagery, really, excellent job.