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| mirror 2008-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love that first line, and all the rest of it. |
| super happy nuclear girl 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuse"Ellis, oh, Ellis. In a bell jar you breathe out your own failure, you bleed it out slow, ten minutes to chop out your veins with a knife like your tangible, plasticized defeat." I read this a while ago but didn't leave a review because I'm a failure, basically. But I really love, love that line. Its perfect. I really like this, your teacher is silly, because I think its wonderful. You write better than most authors. I really wish you'd publish something. You should absolutely try. :) xx |
| Aquafied 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseyour teacher can suck it. there is a lot of honesty. |
| Nvmbr17th 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseLoved it, dear. |