I really like this! I mean it's up to you, but I think you make another one shot that's like a sequal to this or something! It would be really neat to read.

woah, powerful ending! nice work!

Wow, this is a really powerful story. Great writing too. I can't decide whether or not to feel bad for Eric, I mean, what happened was horrible, but he brought it upon himself. Argh, it's making me think! lol

Great Story!