Reviews for The Oliver Sonnets

Yoroy 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseDrivel. The rhymes were mostly forced and the flow was choppy at best. Not to mention the few typos there were. the theme of it was just so...common. It needed a lot of spicing up which you didn't do. 3/10
relapse into change 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abusegod, i'm speachless, i don't know what to say really there's so much emotion in this so, and 'II' beautiful i don't feel right to critize this in any way (even though i didn't even spell critize right) D:
the-foresight 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseIt's always a danger using sonnets that the poem feels structured and forced. I didn't get this feel with these, I thought they flowed quite eloquently. Maybe at times the rhymes felt obvious, but your voice is brought across well.