Couple thoughts:

1. Period at the end of L2?
2. "Though" or "However" on L3. They're both doing the same thing so double upping is a little pointless.
3. Line break after "don't" on L6 (just for flow reasons).

Otherwise, short, sweet and interesting. Not bad for coming out of writers block.

Keep writing,
Midnight

I think this is quite nice...you shouldn't apologize for it. =) The idea of having to 'cut your apples into perfect stars' is cute, like you are too busy wanting to please him to have time for anything else. These two lines:
'Though the sun, however, thinks I’m trying too hard
Yet, she understands that I live for you.'
Are phrased a little awkwardly, think about what you are trying to say in them and I suggest taking out 'however' and 'yet'.