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| Elspeth 2008-05-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseI am really enjoying this story! You're characters are interesting without being cliche. I really like Amelia because even though she attempts to have some grit she is still a lady of her times...she isn't marching around acting like a modern woman. So anyway great work! Please hurry and post the next chapter. I am curious to know what will happen next:) |
| EverTheCrazyCynic 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseIs this by any chance based off of the song of the same name by Alfred Noyes? It's one of my favorite poems ever. If it is, you should mention it in an author's note of some sort. |
| fictionluvr 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseVery good character description. I could imagine them all in my mind. |
| faery tragedy 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseI love this so far! I like how you started with the action instead of bogging us down with tedious and unnecessary background knowledge. Your characters are really intriguing. Swiftie is particularly well-written in my opinion. I'm worried that Amelia will turn out too Mary Sue-esque though. Your language and prose are great! I can tell you've done your research. I hope to read more. *faery tragedy |
| R.M.Whitaker 2008-03-19 ch 2, | abuseAnother excellent one! I do not hesitate to admit that you're a much better writer than I am! Jack just keeps getting better and better, doesn't he? That there's what I call a real man! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! |
| Woodstock1330 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseThanks to everyone who reviewed! Just so you know I DO intend to update very soon, I've been out of town and therefore away from my trusty pc! Sorry for the wait, I'll be posting multiple chapters in a few days, and the start of yet another story! |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abusegreat beginning. I like Swifty and can't wait to see where this goes. I wonder what kind of background the lady has, since she appears to be of high society and yet speaks and acts so brashly. thanks for posting |
| A Butterfly Scream 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWhat can one say? I'll be keeping tags on this story. I liked it very much. Good imagery, tone, rhythm (found myself reading most of it out loud- hope that doesn't embarrass you). It was like something out of a movie. Note- The first time I had ever heard someone say "you cut me to the quick" was in The Wizard of Oz. You've made me very happy. :D |
| cinnamon-24 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseHmm. I like it. |
| R.M.Whitaker 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseVery, VERY intriguing! Attention-grabbing, focus-pinning... I love it! Jack sounds like a devilishly handsome cad! I want more! lol Update again soon! |