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| simpleplan13 2008-02-25 ch 1,  | abuseI like this.. the second line is really wonderful and the alliteration in the fifth line is great... what I really love is the ending about how you used to be just like that because it's so true.. well done PS thanks for your review! |
| LaCharlatan 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuse...Can't...write...review...*inhale*...laughing...too...hard... I really am sorry, tho, that you got splashed. Unfortunately, only a few of them actually grow up and, no, "common sense" is NOT all that common. |
| Glowing Aura 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseOuch. I'm sorry to hear about that. Yeah, freshmen are annoying, I'm so glad I'm done with high school. Every year in high school I wondered whether or not they were getting worse every year or maybe I was just a little more grown up? The world may never know. Anyway, nice poem. I like how you worded it and the ending was perfect. Again, sorry about that incident, though. x__X |