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| I Murder on Impulse 2008-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseFantastic story! xx |
| Heart of the Tide 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThat is so incredibly cute! |
| Swift 2008-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi :D Just wanted to say I really like this story and the whole interesting tree thing you've got going on. You said you'd appreciate some constructive criticism so I'd say possibly a little less swearing at some points even though they're both quite emotional because it kinda interrupts the flow of the talking a tad. Other than that (which is a pathetic criticism, but it just shows how cool I think this is!) I really enjoyed this! Twas awesome :D x |
| Lily's Sushi 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusehm. i read this a lot, just because it's nice to observe something in which someone feels so wanted. (sounded confusing.) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Kinda funny, in a dark and sarcastic way. I do like this, though, because it is actually quite well-written, and it is a good one-shot with a pretty creative plot despite the clicheness in there. A spiffy awesome addition to our c2 from Queen of Absolutely Everything (formerly clumsy eloQuence 6). |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was good, I loved it! Great job! -ARia |
| Jevanminx 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseHahahahahahahahaha that was so cool, and sad, but still cool. Good plotline I liked it. JM |
| TwinkleHeart 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseaw |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseaww! so cute! i love it :) |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abusehhaha this story made me laugh and it was really cute.. |
| Noie 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseGood one-shot. I liked the characters, but the pace was a little choppy and the background kind of vague. Maybe a little more exposition would help. How about a follow-up? Thanks for posting. |