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| NathanDavis 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. I like the rhyme scheme. |
| Sebastian Osprey 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseHi~ Alina! --er, Arina (sorry). Nice poetry, I liked the lines: "He looked for a shell But he could not find One that could say What he left behind" |