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| Oracle of Destiny 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseThis is actually good - I enjoyed reading it. I think what this is really saying is that even though you are a lil bit more experienced as opposed to a freshman, you'll still feel the same no matter what. |
| texaslonghornfn 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseAmen to this. Actually, freshman year was better for me. This year, my sophomore year, it's been...well really crappy. haha. I can really relate to this. :) |
| Julius Gillian 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThe best of us pretend to walk along the sidelines and make it big later, don't feel discouraged man. Writers and poets in my experience tend to be more introvertive and self-contemplative, which there's nothing wrong with. Good poem, straightforward. My only problem is the rhyme scheme, but it's al right. Good. |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot... it's very true and relateable... I really like the last line |
| EclipseIllusion 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThat's one is pretty good. I really liked it. |
| Forward in Time 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseNice, interesting. |