|Reviews for the pull of the tide|
| Generation Dead 2/20/08 . chapter 1
That was really good.!
I liked how you said "the way I ache for more than you can give me and you want more than I let go"
I could really feel the emotion here.
Good work. Keep it up!
| Nianko 2/20/08 . chapter 1
the imagery is perfect, and it really makes you think, and feel it. awesome, really.
i love the four last lines.
you do have a talent.