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please please please update!! I love this story and I need to know wat happens next!

wow this is awsome plz update soon!

well, i can say this, it`s an interesting story... haven`t gotten very far yet though...

Oh goodness, you have really put a lot of effort in this chapter. That definately answers so many questions. I'm assuming either she will have twins or sets of twins or she has a twin herself and doesn't yet know it.
I wish she could have at least one child that she could keep with her - wouldn't she at least need to produce an heir if she marries Nathanial?
Oh I really can't wait to read more. I wonder how the fight will end and I really want her to confront her father! :D

I love it. It was/is a great chapter, I could imagine the action and emotions and it was awsome. I can not exactly what remembered in this chapter when you had it up the other time but it's better this time round =D LoL and if nothing was changed it must have just been a long time since I last read it :p Can't wait for the next chapter =D.

Too lazy to log-in this time. ;)

Awesome past couple of chapters! Can't wait to read more.

Wonderful few chapters! I really hope both she and Nathanial are okay. I'm assuming that she and he are the wolves the statues in the garden are carved in the likeness of. I hope she gets to see her father and his family again! Please, please update soon - I really love your story :)

T.T you made me do it again, dammit, you know, you're so mean XP

This is a fantastic story. I'm glad I chose to read it even though I normally do not bother to read stories with no paragraph spacings and things like that.

I have just one thing to comment on- I understand that you may have written this story on Word or something and you may have indented and things like that, but FP got rid of them when you posted the story. However, you must take the time to put in spaces between paragraphs, as it is, well, not very friendly. A huge *blech*, if I may.

I'm not going to say it's a potentially good story, because it is already a good story.

Just, please, change the format, and you'll get more than 100 reviews, trust me.

Wow, I really love your story - it's brilliant. You should definately try to get it published - your writing is engaging, the story is intruiging and it's easy to get caught up in the characters emotions. I've read hundreds of stories online and never have I mentioned that they should be published until now. I hope you try, I know that you want it to be.
Please update again soon - I really can't wait to read more. I hope if she gets in real trouble she will use her connection to contact Nathanial.
I can't wait for more! :D

... 9 and a half -.-, I wanna see the rest! update and I'll give you a 10! :P

hum... I give your writing a 9/10 :P

Wow.

Two chapters for an update this time.

I loved them both! It's great that Nicky's back with her cubs again...but what's happened to her? Is she going to be a prisoner now?

Yay you have a new chapter it was awsome! I love this you can like totally get this puplished! You need to get chapter 30 ready soon it's killing me! Yay it was so good!