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| simpleplan13 2008-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseagain I love how you describing the numbness without mentioning it until later... I also love how you even envy anger... that's a unique way to look at things... nicely done |
| purple x pen 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseanother brilliant piece by you, only this time, i might be the 'you' instead of the 'I' which is really sad, each stanza holds some truth that can be related to so well done, dont stop writing! |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abusevery emotive and expressive. I think the 3line stanzas worked well. |