again I love how you describing the numbness without mentioning it until later... I also love how you even envy anger... that's a unique way to look at things... nicely done

another brilliant piece by you, only this time, i might be the 'you' instead of the 'I' which is really sad, each stanza holds some truth that can be related to so well done, dont stop writing!

very emotive and expressive. I think the 3line stanzas
worked well.