I think that based on the content of your essay you definitly deserve a scolarship. If if is true that students ask you if your notes are the teachers copy you must be an outstanding student! Your introductory paragraph displays that you are good at writing descriptive pieces.

Good Luck!

Apparently, if we both decide to be teachers... partners in crime, I suppose? That's what my brother's doing as well.
It's a beautiful essay, by the way. Makes my stomach turn (in a good way).
All I can hope for is that your dreams will come true, and never give up. Because the only failure is a quitter.
Every time I speak with you, or read this, my ambitions could never compare.
They would only be damaging themselves.