|Reviews for You're my biggest flaw|
| Michelladora Moon 3/4/08 . chapter 1
I really like this. the vibe i get from reading it is really great, calm but romantic, but sort of sad. very well written though :D
| i'd delete this if possible 3/4/08 . chapter 1
"We breathe/in sync. In and out,/heavy and deep."
"I wear your name upon my lips/and sing it like a lullaby, whisper it like a secret."
I lovelovelove these lines. Absolutely adore them. This is beautiful. I love the imagery about this girl you're speaking to in here. The idealistic tone to it is nice too.
| Adis Crow 2/23/08 . chapter 1
| gg. lass 2/20/08 . chapter 1
this is beautiful
i loved every line of it.
yours until the wind changes,
| Dreaming Heavens 2/20/08 . chapter 1
Wow, I really liked this. I think it was the realism of the poem that drew me in, instead of the fluff on clouds- sort of love. While reading it, I imagined a girl/woman venting out to her guy though he doesn't listen. Great use of parenthesis, they really added to the persona of the speaker. Great Job :
| ce n'est pas que je m'appelle 2/20/08 . chapter 1
Amazing, once again! This hit me hard. You have a lot of talent, and are quickly catching my interest. Welcome to my Favorite Authors List!
| Time To Change 2/20/08 . chapter 1
it felt wistful/seemed tinged with slight regret or sth. Not sure. It felt beautiful though; touching.