I really like this. the vibe i get from reading it is really great, calm but romantic, but sort of sad. very well written though :D

"We breathe/in sync. In and out,/heavy and deep."

"I wear your name upon my lips/and sing it like a lullaby, whisper it like a secret."

I lovelovelove these lines. Absolutely adore them. This is beautiful. I love the imagery about this girl you're speaking to in here. The idealistic tone to it is nice too.

Beautiful writing.

this is beautiful

i loved every line of it.

yours until the wind changes,

Lost

Wow, I really liked this. I think it was the realism of the poem that drew me in, instead of the fluff on clouds- sort of love. While reading it, I imagined a girl/woman venting out to her guy though he doesn't listen. Great use of parenthesis, they really added to the persona of the speaker. Great Job :

Amazing, once again! This hit me hard. You have a lot of talent, and are quickly catching my interest. Welcome to my Favorite Authors List!

it felt wistful/seemed tinged with slight regret or sth. Not sure. It felt beautiful though; touching.