naw! how cute! bet your happy aye *wink* LOL!

Aw! I loved it, I hope he feels the same way.

i love it! its amazing and the imagry capture my imagination! right on!

oh my it's so sweet, I like:

Pulling me closer so I couldn’t get away

As if you were trying to say ‘Never leave me’

I'd love to feel this someday, true love I mean.

it's a nice poem.

I wouldn't use sweet in both the second and third line.. it seemed a bit repetitive.. also you used look in the sixth and seventh line.. again I might change one to gaze or something

You had a smile on your face as you said.. a bit wordy maybe...
With a breathtaking smile, you said, or something to that effect

I might change he's already caught my eye to he'd already... I think the past tense sounds better...

The second night was just as great but last night I remembered the most.. I didn't like that line it wasn't really that relevant and it seemed too long... the reader doesnt need to know there was a second night if you're not gonna talk about it.. I might say, "every moment together was perfection/ but on the night I remember most"

I love the part about asking and answering the silent question that was really nice... I also love the part "I almost exploded" and the lines about putting your arms around your waist so you can't get away and what they were saying.. that was a great description... I also like the ending a lot too

The piece is really sweet and definitely something I could relate too... really nicely done

This is so sweet! I love it so much!
Hope all works out between the two of you.

~angel953

Aww, adorable piece. It sounds like things are going great for you. I hope they continue to go that way. Have a fantastic day. :D

~Twilight Starr~

I'm so happy for you kristie!! I'd say i hoped things are going well, but its apparent they are.

aww so sweet!

Wow. He must be one lucky guy to have found you.
Nicely written.

~Yusuf