|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| girl with rad i o 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abusebeautiful imagery in this. It's filled with longing and I love it. :) especially the second stanza, that's my favorite. |
| fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abusea lie is just as good as the truth if you just believe enough. LOVE IT! genius:) |
| unshattered 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was really amazing, I love the ending and how this is full of endless possibilities. Great work. |
| smeared violence 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseferris wheels scare the shit out of me and gawd, what is there more to say then (thisisbeautiful and the last two lines? gourgeous enough that i can't even spell gourgeous.) |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abusethe last stanza is my favorite. the whole poem is a great piece though, keep it up! Faith |
| doctor's diagnosis 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThis reminded me a lot of a Dave Matthews Band song up until the very end. Not one particular one, but that's just the vibe I got. I'm not a big DMB fan (or at least I claim not to be), but I like this a lot. |