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Reviews For: maybe life will be beautiful for me

girl with rad i o
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abusebeautiful imagery in this. It's filled with longing and I love it. :)
especially the second stanza, that's my favorite.
fatbird33
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abusea lie is just as good as the truth if you just believe
enough.


LOVE IT! genius:)
unshattered
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseThat was really amazing, I love the ending and how this is full of endless possibilities. Great work.
smeared violence
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseferris wheels scare the shit out of me

and gawd, what is there more to say then

(thisisbeautiful and the last two lines?
gourgeous enough that i can't even spell gourgeous.)
Faith Adeline
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abusethe last stanza is my favorite. the whole poem is a great piece though, keep it up!
Faith
doctor's diagnosis
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseThis reminded me a lot of a Dave Matthews Band song up until the very end. Not one particular one, but that's just the vibe I got. I'm not a big DMB fan (or at least I claim not to be), but I like this a lot.
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