i like them...is there anyway you guys could get it on the internet like webcame or somethin'? really wnat to hear the instrumentation and the way the songs really go!

This flowed together very well and the rhymes were very good. They more than simple words that rhymed, it seems like you put a lot of thought into this. I think it's great!
~Lady Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

I don't know if it was intentional, but you spelled "kamikaze" wrong. Yeah...^-^ anyway, liked the song!

Oh my god! I've never read such an awesome piece in my life! Seriously, this was SO good! So, you got a band too? Well, rather, I used to have one known as Velvet Innocence, but.. It's been so long since I've sang with a group. I LOVE this song!!

I liked it a lot and I think it is very well written. good work!