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| Hoodwynk 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abusePretty, gloomy, romantic; nice poem |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThis has a marvelous stop-go quality that mirrors the situation well. Excellent pace. Great haiku. MD:77. |
| Ygg 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI was struck by the last line.. the tension between "entangled" and "estranged" works really well and forces you to reread the whole poem in another, more paradoxical way. The title is sublime and fits so well with the poem! Excellent work I'd say! |