Reviews for Friends ForeverOr So You Said

simpleplan13 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI like this.. it's unfortunately something a lot of people can relate to and it's well done... the questions it asks are really great... A few things... You didn't italicize the third line in the third stanza.. Also the last two lines of the third stanza.. you do know why your heart is full of lead it's because of what they did so that seemed odd.. also "full of lead" seemed kinda off.. maybe why my heart's sinking like lead or something. just a thought But it's a really nice poem as it is PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile
softer side of apples 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseTHIS PIECE MAKES ME SO EMOTIONAL ME AND MY BESTFRIEND GO THROUGH IT ALL OF THE TIME AND IT TAKES A TOLL ON ME AT TIMES. THIS WAS A GREAT READ...
quiet-zone 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseThe whole poem is lovely. I like the use of repetition, "friends forever" repeated enough to give it poignancy, but not too much so it got irritating. Nice Job!
Forward in Time 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseI actually liked this poem, I can't say that for alot of other things I read on here.