|Reviews for I|
| fatbird33 2/22/08 . chapter 1
| Written 2/22/08 . chapter 1
I used to have formatting issues with fp all the time, but then I sort of just stopped formatting. sad day.
I liked this one. it's fairly accessible and the repetition is nice. you manage to convey the feelings of frustration all too well! good job, I guess.
when I saw the letters 'e' and 'd' underlined, I thought of eating disorder. that really had nothing to do with the poem, so I really don't know. what DID you mean by it?
| casi 2/22/08 . chapter 1
if its me you need to scream at... feel free, i'm fine with it.
if you need to talk (and feel up to it or fine or w/e) i'm always here.
| simpleplan13 2/21/08 . chapter 1
I like how you title it I so you can omit it from the rest of the piece and I love the repetition in the piece and how you change parenthesize the one part that varies... one question.. why did you only underline the e & d? it was interesting, but I couldnt figure out the reasoning
PS thanks for your review
| goodlifesalesman 2/20/08 . chapter 1
this is very well written; you can feel the emotion just by reading it.
great job :]
| sweets555 2/20/08 . chapter 1
well, im glad you know you shouldn't cut, but i'm still worried that you might. so even if you aren't talking about it, if you just wanna babble blindly, im here.