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Reviews For: Lemonade
KatieTheWriter 2008-02-29 . chapter 1
Aww what a cute poem! I love lemonade and actually had a lemonade stand when I was little! Haha, it was fun.
L.W 2008-02-23 . chapter 1
omg that is SO god! hmmp. i wish u could have made one about my hamster that was JUST as good. meanie...
simpleplan13 2008-02-23 . chapter 1
lol.. this is cute and funny.. i like extended haikus a lot and you did awesome with the rhyming

One thing is I might separate each haiku into an individual stanza.. I think that might look better

PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile
CarnivalGirl346 2008-02-22 . chapter 1
You are so right! Who can not love lemonade! Finally I'm not the only one who doesnt like hot chocolate!
Julius Gillian 2008-02-22 . chapter 1
I like poems that delve into specific silly subjects like cookies or lemonade and just make a whole deal of fun out of them.

This poem doesn't belong in the haiku section though ;)
Michelladora Moon 2008-02-20 . chapter 1
It's cute :) Lemonade is grand, especially if it's pink lemonade ^_^
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