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qtkemi 2008-07-24 ch 11,	abuseYou HAVE to update soon. I'm not asking you, I DEMAND it. Update or I'll find a way to force you to update (MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-cough-)...(*Never mind the fact that I know nothing about you and can find no way to force you to update...) But you will be forced. It WILL happen! - - - - - Great story, btw. :) -kemi
Jade Elf 2008-07-22 ch 11,	abuseWhat an awesome story, I love the great way
MelodramaticFool 2008-07-16 ch 11,	abuseGood chapter! I loved the art description (naturally since i'm an artist x3) and it was very sad that the guy died it made me sad too. Poor Vesper...all that bad stuff piling up like that. argh just makes me more frustrated that Guy is just her friend. x3 otherwise i loved your story. as always.
Addyson 2008-07-16 ch 2,	abuseSounds really interesting & the first chapter was really good. cant wait to read more ~~Addyson
LondonLi 2008-07-15 ch 11, anon.	abuseAnother wonderful, FABULOUS chapter. I loved all the characters, and Simon was SO CUTE! I'm also thankful for Guy; he's such a great friend. But there wasn't any Andrew. However, I've come to appreciate breaks from him! He's a very intense character. I also liked that Q&A at the bottom; it helped me understand this great world you've created. Well done; I can't wait for the next chapter.
soaring glass 2008-07-15 ch 11,	abuseAnother good chapter! I feel so sorry for Vesper when she tells her twin and Cadence doesn't believe her. That would absolutely send me over the edge too (it has before with my twin brother). But for vesper to finally work up the nerve to tell someone in her family and then for that person to tell her she's crazy--that must be devastating. I really felt for her. I also appreciated more background on what happened with Miguel. it really helps to flesh out Vesper as a person. Also, Simon is so cute! I love the way kids just accept things. Guy is such a good friend. I really wish I had a guy friend like him to lean on when girlfriends are too hard to talk to. I love how much her friends care about her too. No Andrew here. I have to say I was a little disappointed. =D Hopefully, he and the sexual tension will reappear in the next chapter. Thanks for the answers to the questions. I look forward to more questions being answered in the next chapter.
openheadspace 2008-07-15 ch 11,	abusePoor Vesper. I'm glad she had the guts to tell somebody though. :D Update soon!
jurko 2008-07-14 ch 10, anon.	abuseThis is getting better and better, I can't wait to see what comes next.
KelseyBell910 2008-07-11 ch 10,	abuseReally good. Continue soon.
Regin 2008-07-05 ch 10,	abuseI Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
silverhearts 2008-07-04 ch 10,	abuseGod, I love your story! Especially the way you update so soon. Every time I get an e-mail saying you´ve updated, it just brightens my day! So thanks for updating :D silverhearts
openheadspace 2008-07-04 ch 10,	abuseHm... YES! ANDREW+VESPER MOMENT! I can't wait to see what Vesper paints at May's! And the dream really transitions the plot into something more serious. Good job! :D
xBlackSoul 2008-07-04 ch 10,	abusehe, nice nice nice chapters!! so the tingle she feels is from Andrew?? am i Right,!? hahahah, I think Vesper and Andrew could be a very good match.. but update ASAP, please!? x xblacksoul
jammi 2008-07-03 ch 10,	abuseFirst and foremost, HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY! Not American, but Canada Day just passed so spread the love to fellow North Americans, lol, and secondly, LOVED this chapter. I didn't really have anything to say on the previous two which is why I didn't review but this one, this one was brilliant. The conversations flowed smoothly, the hints were dropped subtly but at the same time made it apparent there was plot movement and there were parts where I was nodding emphatically in agreement or at something they said. About the conversation flow, I won't quote anything since that would be too much but that scene with her sister was extremely well done. It read realistically and there was a slightly different vibe between her and her sister then there was with teh others, like, it seemed apparent that they've known each other for a while and I love how the guy didn't even know he was going to have sex, hahah, just brilliantly done and then when Andrew came out, woo, there was definitely some eye action happening, she was not having delusions or whatnot, lol. Again, her and Guy are the cuteness, love how they interact and how even though she's friendly with everyone you manage to show the different type of camraderie [sp?] between them. Oh, and dude, that X-Men conversation? Why did I have one like that yesterday with my mom and sister? LOL, I was looking into when Wolverine's movie was coming out [have to agree that Hugh Jackman could get it] and then I found something that said Gambit was going to be in it. Which, if done correctly and he's anything like the cartoon just upped the sexy AND amazing factor for that movie. Off-topic, I know, but I seriously missed the Cajun in the trilogy though it might've been for the better since we all know how the third one ended. But yeah, back on topic, LOL, I like how at the end you used their magic compatability for the goodbye with her and Andrew to make it a bit more 'intimate'. Um, magic wise, I like the dream and the way the ghosts [I'm assuming the flower in the dream and the sunrise were ghosts] are giving her hints about a danger that's coming. Especially like the symbolism, the way the world appears untouched but hiding out of sight was a danger of some kind and even though she couldn't see it, she could feel it and was aware that it would be making it self known. About the 'dead' ghosts, will she ask her mentor from the guild about them? Or does she not trust him enough? Or will she keep it to herself because she thinks she's going crazy? Also, will we see how her mentor handles the ghosts? Because from what I can gather she goes to them and they show her things and if that's not the way it works it'll be interesting to see how others do it. I wonder who the lovely one is, and the woman who's grasping is she in the stone? I take it she's the danger that's coming? Really liked the way it opened ominously with flowers spouting danger then ended with a lighthearted get together. Reminds me of scary/suspense movies in that sense and you did a good job of it. One thing, is she aware in her dream or is it like a future self? Because this line; [“I wasn’t ready,” Vesper murmured, and began walking again, slowly. “But I am now. I’m here.”] Gave me the impression she knew what was going on. I mean, what wasn't she ready for? That just seems like a strange thing for her to say since she doesn't know what's wrong. It doesn't even match in the sense that she didn't have her magic before. Oh, and I will love to find out why her teacher made her plant the flowers by hand. I like the way [and this is just a guess on my part] that you made her 'natural' magic difficult for her to obtain considering how easy she's been using the ghost eye. It balances things out in my mind and shows that she even though she has this thing no one else has, she's not a natural and it's as strange and maybe even more difficult for her. Great chapter, hope the others flow as well as this one and that Barton fellow needs a swift kick in the **.
fallingstar13 2008-07-03 ch 10,	abuseSo I'm totally a chronic lurker, but for some reason this chapter made me decide that I need to stop lurking and actually review. Probably because I realized how few reviews you're getting, which isn't right because this story is really awesome. It's completely different from other stuff I've been coming across lately. I'm not really sure what it is, but there is something about the characters that just make you fall completely in love with them. (And I totally had this mental image of Guy pouting at me and it made me feel guilty, so you can thank him for this review too. ^_^) Anywho. I really enjoy the whole Vesper-Andrew relationship. I wish it would move faster, but it really shouldn't move faster because the pacing of this story is just fast enough to drag you in but slow enough to keep you wondering. And I'm going to stop rambling now. XD Summary: I really love this story, so keep up the good work!

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