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| Melissa Norvell 2008-03-29 ch 4,  | abuseAnother nice chapter here! Great job! |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-02-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is getting better and better. You have a fair amount of dialouge here so just be sure that your have good description as well. I'll be back for the next chapter. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting story indeed. I really like your descriptive writing style and character interaction. This is definitely worth the read and I'll be sure to give you reviews in the future. If you have time feel free to check out some of my works! You might like them! |