*sigh* need i say anything?

this is another installment of a wonderful series.

i applaud your writing ability. the world you have created is one i will continue to escape to.

absolutely wonderful. *claps*

whens the next book commin? i miss this story D:

Well, I think this story just gets better and better. Once thank for sharing so freely.

I love you dear Amaretto. ;)
Especially now that I have read this series and gained a new sense of appreciation for your astounding writing ability.
I hope to see the beginning of Book Four of the Lost Gods soon.

-BD

Great story, keep up the good work.

Well, I have read five of your stories (Locke and Key, Dance with the Devil, and the Lost Gods trilogy) and I must say "Why aren't your books published yet?!"
You're an amazing writer and I'm very excited to read your other stories. I think the second book in the trilogy was my favourite, but my all time favourite was Dance with the Devil. I adored that one actually.
Please keep up the amazing work as you are my hero of the year. Of course, reading amazing work like yours makes me feel like a lousy writer (haha) but I know that practice makes masterpiece!
"When love and skill work together, expect a masterpiece!"

Um... wow. I don't know what to say to this, but I read the first two and I really liked them, and I like this one too! I really love the series, and it's tempting me... ever so... temptingly... to make covers for them. Um, Do you mind if I do? Try at least... to make simple covers for them? I find that I like that kind of thing... well, anyways yeah.
I'm assuming that you're done the story except for the epilogue, but even if that isn't the case I'm going to talk about the story before this point.
You make vivid, believable, easily-visulizable (er... I know that isn't a word...) characters and places, with a past and it's all so realistic! (In any way "realistic" applies to fantasy) The relationships between the characters, the motivations and such were also quite believable and I love how you show, in every story, how even gods have their failings, and honestly I might end up repeating myself.
I haven't been able to tear myself away from these novels (very worthy of publication) for nearly three days now, and even then I was up all night reading them. (I wasn't aware of the existance of this one until early today so I ended up watching Lucky Star all last night, but if I had I would've been reading it) This is most likely one of the longest reviews I've ever written, but this deserves it.
I look foreward to seeing more of your work!
-Wd
(For who can separate the truth from lies and delusion?)

Great story! I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for writing and sharing.

This trilogy, so far, is very well-written! I love the names and the countries. I can't wait for more!

WOW! Simply amazing... I have been wondering when the next book would be up and when I was browsing through your page I found out that the 3rd book was up... I cannot wait for how the other God's on the 2 remaining countries will show themselves and how their stories will unfold... hopefully you'll have those up soon as well...

Hey!
I'm really looking foward to the next story, it's going to be Verde, isn't it?
But anyway, the only other thing I've found when I'm reading this is that Corinos and Culebra's names have been mixed up a couple of times - have you got a beta-reader? That might be a good idea.
Good job,
Tineke

I am loving this whole Lost Gods series by you, but just a quick note on this chapter, I noticed a small consistancy problem with the bite marks, first Preubas says

'“Yet there are bite marks on the neck,”'

But then the narration says

'The bite marks were low on her right forearm…'

It's just a small thing but it should probably be fixed to avoid confusuion.

I rly rly rly rly rly envy your awesomality. This was pure creativity and win.

BAH! i hate Pruebas now!
but the snakes nya~ (likes snakes even if a bit afraid)
and the guitar! even though i like bass better =3

oh Corinos...I KNOW YOUR PAIN!!
you can so feel the sexual frustration in this chapter
i find it ccute =^-^=