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Reviews For: Stone Rose: Book Three of the Lost Gods - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Aylute
2008-07-04
ch 19,
abuseWell, I have read five of your stories (Locke and Key, Dance with the Devil, and the Lost Gods trilogy) and I must say "Why aren't your books published yet?!"
You're an amazing writer and I'm very excited to read your other stories. I think the second book in the trilogy was my favourite, but my all time favourite was Dance with the Devil. I adored that one actually.
Please keep up the amazing work as you are my hero of the year. Of course, reading amazing work like yours makes me feel like a lousy writer (haha) but I know that practice makes masterpiece!
"When love and skill work together, expect a masterpiece!"
Weinerdog of Death and Doom
2008-06-27
ch 19,
abuseUm... wow. I don't know what to say to this, but I read the first two and I really liked them, and I like this one too! I really love the series, and it's tempting me... ever so... temptingly... to make covers for them. Um, Do you mind if I do? Try at least... to make simple covers for them? I find that I like that kind of thing... well, anyways yeah.
I'm assuming that you're done the story except for the epilogue, but even if that isn't the case I'm going to talk about the story before this point.
You make vivid, believable, easily-visulizable (er... I know that isn't a word...) characters and places, with a past and it's all so realistic! (In any way "realistic" applies to fantasy) The relationships between the characters, the motivations and such were also quite believable and I love how you show, in every story, how even gods have their failings, and honestly I might end up repeating myself.
I haven't been able to tear myself away from these novels (very worthy of publication) for nearly three days now, and even then I was up all night reading them. (I wasn't aware of the existance of this one until early today so I ended up watching Lucky Star all last night, but if I had I would've been reading it) This is most likely one of the longest reviews I've ever written, but this deserves it.
I look foreward to seeing more of your work!
-Wd
(For who can separate the truth from lies and delusion?)
tmelange1
2008-06-05
ch 19,
abuseGreat story! I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Anathema-4
2008-03-30
ch 19,
abuseThis trilogy, so far, is very well-written! I love the names and the countries. I can't wait for more!
pfeiffer
2008-03-20
ch 19,
abuseWOW! Simply amazing... I have been wondering when the next book would be up and when I was browsing through your page I found out that the 3rd book was up... I cannot wait for how the other God's on the 2 remaining countries will show themselves and how their stories will unfold... hopefully you'll have those up soon as well...
Tineke
2008-03-14
ch 19,
abuseHey!
I'm really looking foward to the next story, it's going to be Verde, isn't it?
But anyway, the only other thing I've found when I'm reading this is that Corinos and Culebra's names have been mixed up a couple of times - have you got a beta-reader? That might be a good idea.
Good job,
Tineke
Tineke
2008-03-13
ch 5,
abuseI am loving this whole Lost Gods series by you, but just a quick note on this chapter, I noticed a small consistancy problem with the bite marks, first Preubas says

'“Yet there are bite marks on the neck,”'

But then the narration says

'The bite marks were low on her right forearm…'

It's just a small thing but it should probably be fixed to avoid confusuion.
Daydream Nation
2008-03-03
ch 19,
abuseI rly rly rly rly rly envy your awesomality. This was pure creativity and win.
Riosuu
2008-02-29
ch 4,
abuseBAH! i hate Pruebas now!
but the snakes nya~ (likes snakes even if a bit afraid)
and the guitar! even though i like bass better =3
Riosuu
2008-02-29
ch 3,
abuseoh Corinos...I KNOW YOUR PAIN!!
you can so feel the sexual frustration in this chapter
i find it ccute =^-^=
Riosuu
2008-02-29
ch 2,
abuseaw, Culebra's so cute (muahahah i understand spanish!)
and Corinos sounds absolutely scrumptouse
i only wish there was more time spent with the grandmother [she seems my kind of people]
but, YAY! more male love! ^_^
Riosuu
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abuseYAY!
NEW BOOK!
Torri
2008-02-24
ch 19, anon.
abuseomg i completly forgot ur stories were on here then i read dance with the devil and saw this third book and it been like 2 years since i read the first one so i went back and sat here all day readin all of the first second and third book can't wait for the fourth and the fifth to come out cause this is an excellant series pls hurry and complete
love: Torri
Ruri Star Sykel
2008-02-22
ch 19,
abuseohmygoodness! i love you! *hugs Amaretto-chan* you finially posted the next story and what it only took you like a year...? *jumps up and down* oh! how i love you right now! you're a saint, did you know that? *hugs again* of corse you new that! so when will the next one be out? have you already started it? oh! i hope so! *hugs tighter* you get a cookie! *hands cookie* i hope yoou like it! *bounies around happily* the first story is my most favorte, i liked the second one but not as much as the first, and this one well this one is most deffently my second favorte! i the the storm gods they are amazing! *squil* and the snakes in this story are so cool! i want to be able to sleep in a bed a snakes! that would be so neat feeling don't you think?*hugs again* thinks so much for finally posting the thrid part, i loved it!

bye now!

Ruri
AlaskanNativeAngel
2008-02-22
ch 19,
abuseI wasn't sure you were doing this story anymore after seeing how long ago you had put up Book 2. But I'm very glad that you have continued it. You're a great writer and it's always good to read your writings. Lol, I'm probably going to read Book 1 over again though some of the details are foggy now.
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