No offense but have you read the play? Im performing it right now and let me tell you, your monolouge has none of the characteristsic for someone with sever mental problems. She isnt crazy, she is ill. We came to the conclusion that she has autism, shes showing the symptons. Check it out. You've written her as some angry teenager when shes more like an annoyed child.

Sorry to say this but, re write

hm... no, actually, I don't think you're crazy. I think you need help though, just not the kind you're getting there.

A break out is in order eh?

Good stuff - keep writing

Ha.

I like how the paranoia is really clear and evident, even in its brevity. Very nice.

--Rachel

P.S... your summary is cut off. Word limits, my bane.