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| Black and White Dreams 2008-02-25 ch 1,  | abusei can here the quiet desperation in this. it is very very beautiful. i love the first and third stanzas. the whole hero idea is really cool =] lovelovelove this poem |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abusewow...that is just the sweetest poem of yours ive read. it's so beautifully written i love it! I wasnt sure if you meant "Tell me you'll always be there to catch ME when i fall," in the second stanza. and if you did, i think you should break it into two lines so its "tell me youll always be there/to catch me when i fall." --SB, review marathon |
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseawh the whole idea of having someone to catch you is really nice:) well done, great poem |