Reviews for I Love You, And That Will Never Change

angel953 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abuseSo ya, just wanted to put in a quick note about this one. I kinda left it up to the reader to decide if the guy is dead or if he just leaves the girl. In reviews, tell me what your perspective of this is... Thanks!! ~angel953
Black and White Dreams 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abusei feel like crying =[ it reminds me of edward and bella in new moon when edward leaves. whaa :"( i love this! ~Black and White Dreams~
Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseSweet. Really sweet, i like it. i cant even pick out my favorite stanza from this... But i think you should change the stanza "don't listen when people try to say i never loved you/its not true/ just because im leaving you doesnt mean my love is untrue." In a way it sounds a tiny bit awkward, and i think its the way the last line is written. but you can keep it the way it is its not too bad. --SB, review marathon
Hed in the Cloudz 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseSo sweet! I like how you've split things up. This reminds me a bit of the background monologue in Dream Theater's "Space Dye Vest"-- very pure and assuring. I like the little half-rhymes especially!