|Reviews for Discordant|
| I Found Myself At 24 3/6/08 . chapter 1
I really like the beginning! Suggestion for line 10: move carefully so it reads "sift carefully through my soul". It reads better in my mind. I really like the last line of the 4th stanza as well!
| steel winged angel 2/21/08 . chapter 1
Very nicely done. Your metaphors are always so unique.