You make me feel better about my godawful science class. I shall ponder your Words while agonizing over heats of solutions and hydrogen bonding. If only I could turn around in my seat... and stare at the One behind me. But no, face front, eyes on the board. And he wouldn't look back for me anyway. (My own little angstyness. ;) )

haha i don't really like much prose
but i love it if it's interesting
and done well.
i really like how everything played into this.
your sentences are a little flat to me..just all v forward
and almost unemotional
but as a whole
i think it's a beautiful piece
definitely something to feel good about writing!

Aw... That was really cute, especially the last sentence! It's really sweet how he attempts to explain his attraction through science but ends up deciding it takes the magic out. I really like this, though it's hard to figure out why... Just one of those "I DO" things...

KEEP IT UP.

Brilliant. I love all the science in it, even if I don't really like the subject. Haha. Write more like this, yeah?

Pretty cool, but I found more bio references then chemistry ones. A nod to valance electrons would have been nice too :-)

science is pretty cool. V. Touching

oh, that's just *beautiful*. honestly, i have no words.
'he is cinematic'. just, oh. wow.