my you're very vivid. and use lots of action verbs. could you tell though what poem of mine it was you liked?

I was interested by this (in a good way) and I only really have one comment. In line 6, you refer to the Brass door-handle not opening properly. Is this intentional, or do you mean to say that the DOOR itself does not open?
Do not take this as negative criticism however. This is impressive.

You're brilliant with imagery. Your descriptions are great.

'questions sear away my flesh/and kind words pierce my skin'.
oh, darling, you are far more talented than you ever let on.