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Reviews For: Bethany's Birthday Present

asylum writer
2008-04-19
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abuseReview marathon - link in profile.

I like this, it's cute. It made me smile.

It's funny as well. I like that she covers up inanimate objects when they're cold, or considers doing so. Just some phrases that stood out to me: "her black hole (a.k.a. purse).", "a weighty tome indeed" "the idea which had so kindly dropped from the sky"...

"I don’t have time to knit a nifty sweater..." - oh darn. Isn't that what everyone does for birthdays?
Twilight Starr
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseNice, short story. The ending made me smile.

~Twilight Starr~
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abusevery cute story.

it sounds like a hallmark card, but you know, whatever. still a funny story.
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