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| asylum writer 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseReview marathon - link in profile. I like this, it's cute. It made me smile. It's funny as well. I like that she covers up inanimate objects when they're cold, or considers doing so. Just some phrases that stood out to me: "her black hole (a.k.a. purse).", "a weighty tome indeed" "the idea which had so kindly dropped from the sky"... "I don’t have time to knit a nifty sweater..." - oh darn. Isn't that what everyone does for birthdays? |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseNice, short story. The ending made me smile. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abusevery cute story. it sounds like a hallmark card, but you know, whatever. still a funny story. |