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| Take the Money and Run 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseYou're right, I think a lot of people can relate to this. I like the "endless white, with no end or beginning" comparison, it was good. The 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' in the line "sometimes I feel like I'm trapped". Good job though, this is pretty strong. Courtesy of the review marathon. |
| Takhisis 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseonce again it me... haha. i love your poems so much i can't help commenting. anyway, the descriptions for this are stunning! I can even imagining! |