Reviews for No Good Friend - FictionPress.com

Black and White Dreams 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abusei agree with sanitys brink. i think you should add a few more lines to this. it just seems a little incomplete to me. i like it a lot though =] ~Black and White Dreams~
Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI like the way this poem is written, too. and you might've meant for this to be just a short little poem but i think you might want to add a little more to it, maybe just a couple lines to explain if it was just you being a really bad friend, or if your friend did something to you first. but great poem anyways. --SB, review marathon
simpleplan13 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI like this.. the format is great and it's interesting that you're talking about you being a bad person not someone else... It seems unfinished though.. I want more.. what happened after? or why did you do this? It seems too short.. Also the title is odd.. Not a Good Friend or Bad Friend just seems better Anyhow.. it's a good piece that most ppl can relate to from one side or the other PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile
writingxonxwalls 2008-02-22 ch 1,	abusewritingxonxwalls @ the review game I really like how the POV of your poem could go two different ways. It could be someone ignoring a friend, or it could be someone ignoring a bad friend. It seems that you might have left that up to the reader. Um. There's really nothing I would change! Great job!! --WxOxW