The solution: narcissism?

Hahha.

I love the short, sharp snap of all your poems, this one especially.

Because it's true.

And I hope you meant for it to be humorous, because if you didn't, I have a strage sense of humor I suppose.

I thought it was hilarious.

I added you to my fav authors...
best wishes ...

*Tiffy

(ps... what's ur first name?)

I laughed out loud when I read the last line...too good.
lleen

ah so simple, so striking. it's lovely.

mezzie

I like this, it is cute and clever while using simple words. However, it's also slightly wistful and sad, and of course using Shakespeare is always good.

haha, i love love love this! for one, bitter sarcasm is always one of my favorite things (you know, like that annoying song) and for two, i'm assuming you know your Shakespeare (so you're pretty awesome to begin with). yes, well, great job! may your love life not resemble a Shakespeare comedy in the least!

~Winter~

lol I love the ending its funny.. short but very cute and well done


thanks for the review!