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greenwood22 2009-07-03 . chapter 11
yay another chapter!
I liked it, and the end is a bit suspenseful, i have a feeling something really fun is going to happen in the party, after all it is Halloween...
good job it was worth the wait.
GoldenEyedFury 2009-04-08 . chapter 10
wicked, update soon!!
greenwood22 2009-01-09 . chapter 10
I was so excited when I saw the email of the new chapter and I wasn't at all disappointed. Great chapter, it was funny, and just awesome. You did have some errors like saying 'he' when you mean 'she', i think you just mistyped the 's', but it was good. We get to see the girls in action! Keep updating, the story is awesome!
greenwood22 2008-09-30 . chapter 9
good chapter, maybe a little bit...girly, but anyway. There is just one thing that threw me off a bit, her body was aching and she went running?
I'm curios about how they are going to do it...sounds fun.
urbanfictionalist 2008-09-30 . chapter 9
i liked it i'm not so sure about their plan though. i hope you update soon
TornBlackWings 2008-09-09 . chapter 1
Love this story, update ASAP plz
greenwood22 2008-08-04 . chapter 8
Good chapter! I have a feeling Leigh and Aaron are going to get together really soon...
fortuneismymuse 2008-08-03 . chapter 8
Update soon! I'll keep an eye out for this story. :)
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-08-03 . chapter 8
Love it! LOL so Leigh and Aaron??
Interesting- I like it.
Update soon!
misfit09 2008-08-03 . chapter 8
This is defiantly one of my favorite stories. I like everything about it so far.

Keep up the good work!
greenwood22 2008-07-19 . chapter 7
amazing chapter, the reactions are very realistic, great job.
urbanfictionalsit 2008-06-16 . chapter 6
whet i wonder iswhen their all going to find out about each others powers. And about the reviews i would but sometimes i am etremely lazy nd just dont feel like it just like i didnt feel like signing in. but i do enjoy your story and cant wait fo your next update


urbanfictionalist
Impersonating Sugar 2008-06-16 . chapter 3
Is there any particular reason she hates Aaron? Or does she just feel the need to target her emotions about the apartment on someone?

I personally think more should be mentioned about their powers. ^.^ At the moment, they seem a bit secondary.
Impersonating Sugar 2008-06-16 . chapter 2
Subtle yet prominent is bit of a contradiction. You also spelled "today" wrong.

I love how everyone makes fun of Nick's height. Picking on short people is just inexplicably fun, isn't it? I tease my friend about it all the time. Lol.
Impersonating Sugar 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
So all four have super powers and just happened to be "mysteriously" evicted the same day? I bet somebody's onto them. Interesting start.
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