it sounds really good, it's really complex (sp?) like you get it, but you don't and it's really abstract

I love it

Rather frightening.

~the Stranger in the moonlight

I liked the descriptiveness and imagery of this piece, but I felt as if you were holding back somehow. As if you were trying to let something out, and just couldn't quite lose control like you wanted. If that makes sense. I look forward to reading some of your others, though. Thank you.

Very interesting. I dunno, it's not one of your best. It feels quite loose in the way that it's written, rather than tight and concise. But good job anyway. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

The analogy/metaphor to a puzzle is amazing and the imagery is very demented and powerful just like the title...Keep writing...

Beautiful. Honestly. It was just amazing. Keep writing. ^^

OMG i love the title i love the details and it is just so amazing*cough* as usual! *cough* keep it up!

Hm... it was a very good idea, but it wasn't as well written as most of your work. Not one of my favorites, but you still have that raw emotion that is characteristic of your poetry. Good, but not the best. Keep writing!

really powerful images and I love how you also tell us her reaction... that was a really awesome element... I also love the title and the way you make her puzzlement into an actual puzzle.. that was great

As always, awesomazing! =) Love the analogy to a jigsaw puzzle. Great job- keep it up.
--Katrina