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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseRather frightening. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| Finwe 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI liked the descriptiveness and imagery of this piece, but I felt as if you were holding back somehow. As if you were trying to let something out, and just couldn't quite lose control like you wanted. If that makes sense. I look forward to reading some of your others, though. Thank you. |
| Princess-anna57 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I dunno, it's not one of your best. It feels quite loose in the way that it's written, rather than tight and concise. But good job anyway. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Chidori Nadare 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThe analogy/metaphor to a puzzle is amazing and the imagery is very demented and powerful just like the title...Keep writing... |
| Vanyalli 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Honestly. It was just amazing. Keep writing. ^^ |
| lookin4nemo 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseOMG i love the title i love the details and it is just so amazing*cough* as usual! *cough* keep it up! |
| Billie.Joelle 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseHm... it was a very good idea, but it wasn't as well written as most of your work. Not one of my favorites, but you still have that raw emotion that is characteristic of your poetry. Good, but not the best. Keep writing! |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abusereally powerful images and I love how you also tell us her reaction... that was a really awesome element... I also love the title and the way you make her puzzlement into an actual puzzle.. that was great |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAs always, awesomazing! =) Love the analogy to a jigsaw puzzle. Great job- keep it up. --Katrina |