Reviews for Motion in the Ocean

to.make.you.feel.my.love
2008-04-04
ch 1,

abuseI've never heard of McFly, so I don't know how much this relates to the song. But...it's quite good. You need to work on your grammar and sentence structure, however. If you need help with this, simply message me, I have a 100 in Language Arts and the hardest teacher in school; she submitted a few of my stories for publishing. So I kinda know how to write. :)

"What we do here today echoes in eternity."
--Maximus, Gladiator

vi
2008-02-25
ch 1, anon.

abuseayy me encanta lu... muy dramaticoo jajajja y romnticoo.. tu sabes lo q es bueno :)

bueno nos vemos en la semana!

love!

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