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i liked it, despite the crushingly depressing feeling it imprinted on my forehead. it really had some impact, so it's gotta be good.
particularly enjoyed the film theme of the last paragraph.
slight criticism: "like sisyphus" and "like nietzsche" grated somewhat. it seemed to interrupt the flow a little.
overall good. look forward to more!

This is really good. Your words just have a way of flowing. Great Job. :)

I just gotta say I love your imagery--again. My favorite line was: "I wield 'I love you' like a talisman, a weapon to break my heart and others." Brilliant.

Good job. It's something that a lot of people can relate to, and they're kind of lucky if they can't. The expectation of a movie-scene ending with kissing in the rain is what everyone wants, and you made that clear. I really liked it. :)