Beautiful.

lovely poem. you should write more poetry; you're very good.

this is such a great poem! i love it! XD keep writing!

I love it! I think you should write some more, personally, but that because I enjoy your writing.

Waugh! I give it a majillion times love! (And I are win at grammar, yes?)

The imagery is pleasing, the words flow nicely, and the overall concept plays out well.

The poem itself got ten out of ten. It was a little awkward in the middle, but you get major bonus points for mentioning pollen and bees while speaking about being a virgin. Seriously, major bonus points.

Karin

(P.S. Zheyne, to whom I've just read this over the phone, agrees with me.)

wow. that was really good! love it!

Aw . . . That was beautiful.
It was sweet, and a little sad . . . but not too sad, more hopeful