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perpetual questions
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abusethe title instantly drew me in.

this perfectly captures a number of concepts; insomnia, "writer's block", discontentment, depression. just lovely.
electric feel
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusei can relate
you told it perfectly
Nemonus
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseGood; tis smooth and evocative of a feeling of restlessless, of writer's block. "shallow graves" is an excellent term for that, and I could see the keyboard motif throughout the first two stanzas. Nice sorta self-referential use of the French (I hope I've got my languages right...) also.
losing gracie girl
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abusestunning.
absolutly stunning.

yours until the wind changes,
Lost
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