This is so beautiful and full of despair and a desperate longing...

the title instantly drew me in.

this perfectly captures a number of concepts; insomnia, "writer's block", discontentment, depression. just lovely.

i can relate
you told it perfectly

Good; tis smooth and evocative of a feeling of restlessless, of writer's block. "shallow graves" is an excellent term for that, and I could see the keyboard motif throughout the first two stanzas. Nice sorta self-referential use of the French (I hope I've got my languages right...) also.

stunning.
absolutly stunning.

yours until the wind changes,
Lost