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| perpetual questions 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusethe title instantly drew me in. this perfectly captures a number of concepts; insomnia, "writer's block", discontentment, depression. just lovely. |
| electric feel 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusei can relate you told it perfectly |
| Nemonus 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseGood; tis smooth and evocative of a feeling of restlessless, of writer's block. "shallow graves" is an excellent term for that, and I could see the keyboard motif throughout the first two stanzas. Nice sorta self-referential use of the French (I hope I've got my languages right...) also. |
| losing gracie girl 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abusestunning. absolutly stunning. yours until the wind changes, Lost |