 AmorphousHeart 2008-12-22 . chapter 1This is so beautiful and full of despair and a desperate longing... |
 a silenced revolution 2008-03-29 . chapter 1the title instantly drew me in.
this perfectly captures a number of concepts; insomnia, "writer's block", discontentment, depression. just lovely. |
 metatextual 2008-03-28 . chapter 1i can relate
you told it perfectly |
 Nemonus 2008-02-23 . chapter 1Good; tis smooth and evocative of a feeling of restlessless, of writer's block. "shallow graves" is an excellent term for that, and I could see the keyboard motif throughout the first two stanzas. Nice sorta self-referential use of the French (I hope I've got my languages right...) also. |
 gg. lass 2008-02-22 . chapter 1stunning.
absolutly stunning.
yours until the wind changes,
Lost |