That last sentance is chilly. I like it.

I kinda agree with all of your reviewers, my dear sis. But it's your story, so I'm powerless against you. XD

I agree with both of your reviewers. It would actually be nice if there was a sequel of this story.

...you're right yet again, I cannot compose a review longer than this. [Perhaps I am lost for words?]

Anyway, it was nice.

oh. i agree with the first review. u should write a sequel to this. ^.^ keep me posted. :)

Oh what a sad story. I would like to know what happened to her family. Maybe something supernatural. Consider a sequel to the story where you tell HER story.