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Reviews For: My Life is a Soap Opera

Fractured Illusion
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuse" AKA hell on wheels"
*laughs* That's a funny way of putting it!

"but I am 99 sure"
99 percent?

Anyhow, it was a really charming read, but I cannot help but feel that it grew a bit bland. The start was awesome. But middle to end was weaker.

This definitely have potential, though, so keep it up!

- Frac, from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
tibetan-knight
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseReview Marathon! (link in my profile)

I absolutely love this. I find it so hilarious that Lindsay is aware that her life is like a soap opera, but she's all like "None of this is my fault!" And I like how you pull the soap opera elements out and made it part of her life, but still developed it into something interesting.

Just a few technical errors. "...and when Eli I looked into Eli’s dark hazel eyes as I said my vows..." That's probably not what you meant to write. But no biggie ^.^

--Rachel
SickButPretty
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. It's lively, has got a real bite to it. I shall follow it in the future providing I'm not swamped with school. Ps is Zeke supposed to be a teenager? Just wondering.
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