Reviews for Die, Everyone's Doing It

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awesomelyme 2008-07-25 ch 14,	abuseI liked the chapter. There were some parts were it was skippy, but overall it was good. Hope you feel better.
HGiel 2008-07-24 ch 14,	abuse'Physical contact for him was only pain and I liked to unnerve him by making it gentle, confusing, even as he struggled not to hurt me.' This is the most romantic story on this site! 'Tonight we’re jumping through rings of fire.' And also, the most Johnny Cashrific.
AmberMarieee 2008-07-24 ch 14,	abuseThe story creeps me out...in a good way, I think... but I still love it. It's so unique...and I don't know, I've just never read anything like it before. You write so well. update soon!! And I don't know why you wouldn't like writing this chapter, its so good.
Rizzy 2008-07-23 ch 14,	abuseAh Your story is such a breath of fresh air. It definitely is an experience reading it. It is intense in such a way that there's so much emotion in each and single chapter. I LOVE Delilah and Cain, both twisted in their own ways but believable enough that they aren't caricatures. Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter =) Hopefully, you'll find the inspiration you're looking for.
Faith Adeline 2008-07-22 ch 14,	abuseI liked this chapter, I'm just a little confused how they get from being by the friends, to him actually doing the drugs? Cause I get she's thinking about it cause the friend mentions how he isn't on anything. But then it's like he IS doing the drugs, and then they leave. So maybe I'm just reading it wrong, but if I'm not, I'd maybe just add a little thing in to that part. Maybe mentioning that they go somewhere, something like that. Other than that, I liked it! Keep it up! Faith
Nonstandard 2008-07-22 ch 14,	abuseI haven't reviewed in a while :[ Wow. At the beginning i was wondering if they got together, it seemed sort of like they did in the last chapter, but those two confuse me so much. I kinda of understand their relationship at the end :] This is so creepy, like i say in every review. but I'm so addicted. Good jesus, just update right now.
it's julia 2008-07-22 ch 14,	abuseBefore I start, let me say that I finished this reply like five minutes ago, then closed the window before hitting "submit." I suck. I find it interesting that you get so in-character that you can write about the things that you don't actually believe. I doubt I could ever do that. I think, as a rule, I should find out what exactly I believe before I try to write about those things, let alone the things I -don't- believe. I think I connect more with Delilah as well, but have a bit more hope... Sometimes, I wish I could get some of my thoughts out, too. I'm never really satisfied with what I write though. I hope it's working for you with Die. Don't hate on this chapter too much. I liked it a lot, and I didn't find it boring at all. It was good to see another side of Cain (several, actually). Lenox freaks me out quite a bit, and I was praying Delilah would bury Cara alive (the next chapter, maybe?). I don't see a happy ending for Cain and his drug use, and I'm really hoping Delilah won't get too curious. I'm still trying to figure out if Cain cares about her more than he lets on. I wonder if he even thinks it's worth it to really care about another person. It seems he barely cares about himself. One of the reasons I can't stop reading this story is that I know people exactly like your characters. Really, it's uncanny (sometimes scary). That's probably why none of this strikes me as "psychotic." Just deeply interesting. Sorry to hear that you're sick. Best wishes. As for inspiration, I'd suggest reading Fight Club, but the last thing you need is to be compared to Palahniuk, right? Maybe set a few fires or visit a mental institution. The people there are bound to be full of inspiration. :] Just kidding, just kidding. Hoping you are well.
She Had Somewhere To Go. 2008-07-22 ch 14,	abuseAMAZING UPDATE SOON
hotaru89 2008-07-22 ch 14, anon.	abuseDespite what you say, I really like this chapter. Something about it, that I love. And the scene with Delilah and Cain, with the friends, that was great. Keep up the good work, your story is amazing.
authordream4life 2008-07-22 ch 14,	abuseGreat song choices at the end of this one! My Chemical Romance plus Nine Inch Nails equals ORGASMIC REACTIONS, my friend. The ending bit with the circus--PRICELESS. I enjoyed the addition of the new characters, particularly Lenox. Still not too sure if I caught his deal yet, or what, but we'll see where he leads, I guess. And don't hate on this chapter--it was really good. The update should have been 90327529584 times faster, though. XD Keep up the awesome stuff. XD
tibetan-knight 2008-07-12 ch 13,	abuseOoh. Great chapter. --Rachel
observe 2008-07-09 ch 13, anon.	abuseThis is getting ridiculous. Palahniuk: "We're the middle children of history, man. No purpose or place. We have no Great War. No Great Depression. Our Great War's a spiritual war... our Great Depression is our lives." Your Slight Change in words: “Do you think that maybe we’re the middle children of existence?” Both lines spoken by the idealized obsession of the main characters. This is plagiarism. At this rate your just going to make Cain a figment of Delilah and I wonder where you'll get THAT twist from?! But no- you wouldn't be that over, would you? You'll probably find a way to combine all the endings of his various books at once! What a joke.
awesomelyme 2008-07-06 ch 13,	abuseI think it's cool how it skipped around. And I wish I was as good as you are with updating. My post are usually late! Oh well. Great chapter.
DunxDunxDunx 2008-07-05 ch 13,	abuseHahaha this is such an incredibly cute yet twisted story at the same time! I love it!
it's julia 2008-07-03 ch 13,	abuseAhh! I really liked this chapter! The way you described communication was really interesting. The anecdote you used was fantastic, too. Also, I'm just wondering: are these your personal philosophies or just things you're exploring for the sake of it, or what? You seem very mature for 17. I'm 16, and it's hard to find people who think like this. --I'm just gushing now. That chapter was effin' magnificent. The boundary-breaking between Delilah and Cain really puts a smile on my face. :] Add more as soon as is humanly possible!

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