I hope this gets published! Still one of my favorites :)

where can i read the rest of this fic? i know you said it in your profile, but can you give me the url please? thank you!

Nyo...butbut...it sounded so interesting T.T

Is there any way I could read it sometime soon? Cause I have HSC coming up, and nowish is my only gap between trials and HSC...email, perhaps?

...dammit, it's still not on Authonomy. What's your definition of soon?

It's like Fight Club all over again! ...no, really, it's EXACTLY like Fight Club. Only...set in high school. Complete with dramatic flash-forward and everything.

But hey, I love Fight Club, so it's all good.

Just finished, and i'm not sure how i feel about this story.
No, it's great. It was interesting seeing everything from Delilah's perspective...
And here comes this 'but' that i want to say...without much reasoning added to it because well, a little epilogue that shared the other character's view would've...

see , i dont know.
I think the ending was expected, and just the mere curiousity of how she would resolve her problems drove me on to finish reading this. Because, we can all relate to her p.o.v near the begining, but her personality/characterization was just a little lacking to me.
A little.
But then again, i can't imagine how someone could go to her extent...
I was just a little put off that her solution was very, um typical. expected. not suprising. etc.
Which is a good thing, because it shows that their human?
Blah.
I guess i was just expecting this WABAM ending that wouldve floored me...and i guess this one did, too. I'm just not SATISFIED.
GOSH. WRITING A REVIEW WAS NEVER THIS HARD.

/spazzed/

nevermind.
i liked it.
i'll just leave it at that.

New reader- here, here.
How do i explain this,
it's different and dark, mysterious yet expected from these behaviors and I'm not sure how it'll end.

It's keeping me on my toes. Sorry i havent been reviewing for each chapter, but it's just been so good- i couldn't spend a second away from reading the next part (:

Hi, I'm here to report a possible plagiarism? I've never done this before but with this recent bug roaming FictionPress, I thought it should be known, at least.

I haven't exactly read your story but I've heard of it &I was browsing FanFiction the other day when I noticed one in particular. The title was, "Die, Everyone's Doing It" by allurement. I knew that I had heard the title before so I Googled it and your story came up. Now, as I compare the first chapter &theirs, I noticed that this person has most likely revised it to his/her own standards to match the anime. It is possible that this person is changing the story to his/her liking to fit the anime a bit more but might still be your idea in general.

I was just hoping that maybe you could check it out because I abhor plagiarism and its followers. Thank you.

I hope this helps &please feel free to contact me at my email: .

beautiful

oh this chapter just make me feel so happy
I love that Delilah and Cain are finally getting close to each other
they are such fascinating characters and so suited to each other
And its good to see Delilah making some actual changes, not just superficial shizznit

Its strange
Everything she wants
She wants to be so radically different, so unique
she seems to think that she is the only one to feel this way, that everyone else is just a carbon copy
but she says it herself, she wants everyone to pay attention. She wants to make an impact on the world
but doesn't everyone? Isn't that what leads to girls posing nude in playboy? Politicians going mad for power...
your story just really makes me think
about what people want. What people think they want. And whether we actually want what we think we want, or if we just want these things because society has told us that these things will make us happy. Like, i often wonder if i like boys becuase society has told me i ought to like them.. Would i like girls if society told me i ought to like them instead? I think shoulder pads are ridiculous and ugly. Had i lived in the 80s i would probably love them.
Well anyway, brilliant story. Its not often at all that a story makes me think so much as yours

Wow
got me hooked already
I found so much of this story to be so true - like teens having an attention span of two syllables. Only, ive found that in my new school we have an attention span of one syllable
I loved the was you gave her the life changing experience, shaking her whole world up and contrasted it to the pencil on the ground. And then the way she sees the whiteboard marker as chemical lines. It really showed how she had changed to dramatically, while life around her just went on, and it was so subtle and brilliant
you are seriously so talanted
And i really feel as though i can relate to it, i came to that realisation a month or two ago. I decided to become the most brilliant artist of all time, and wrote myself a list of things to do before i die (of about 200 things)
oh sorry for that massive ramble
But brilliant idea, and brilliant writing

This story is one of the most twisted stories that I have ever read. It makes me slightly sick, slightly anxious, and slightly horrified. But even though I don't agree with almost any of the views or ideas expressed in it, I find myself intrigued by the story itself. I can't stop reading it. It's tragic, disgusting, and horrifying, but the utter devastation of it and the mangled mess of characters make it hard for me to leave.
It's strange. I don't even like it exactly (no offense). It's too twisted for me to like. It's kind of like when they take your blood in the hospital. I don't like them to shove a needle in my arm and take the blood. But I can't help but watch the tube fill up with it.
Anyway, the point of this long-winded review is this:
Your story is one of the few that I have read recently, and certainly one of the few that I have read on this site, that makes the reader think and feel. There's a dark feeling all tied up to this story, and it challenges the reader. You are a great writer.

I really like this story. More I read I can actually see what Delilah is going through. Almost relate to whats happening. This is very well-written.

Alright, i'm a sucky reader and reviewer. I just realized, while going throuhg my old reviews that I never reviewed the last chapter. Which is a dick move. Anyway, fabulous fabulous fabulous. This story hasnt gotten enough credit that it deserves. You have crafted a masterpiece. And, you know, there are mistakes and some scenes that run too long or too short. There are grammer errors and descriptions that can be elaborated on or deflated. However, at the end of this story, none of that really matters because this is a kick ass first/second whatever draft. You have taken all these amazing aspects like: allegory, character development, symbolism, ect. and made this artwork that is unmatchable. I'm dead serious in everything I say. When I began reading this story, I was hooked from the first line, the first chapter, the first character. You were able to do what most authors are not: take everything that's in your head, or in anyone's head, and put into words...NOW, i've totally inflated your ego, so I want you to also not stop working hard, because we both know this story did not come out with a snap of the fingers. People have to work for this kind of product, and I dont want you to forget the hard work, dedication, and thought you put into makeing this story come alive. You are an amazing writer, and I hope I can write to this extent some day.

Thank you for this.

The ending could not have been more fitting. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talents.