I cannot wait for more of this.

Like its namesake: it is "sweet" and "addicting".

^_^

Lol Kissing fairies are bad luck. I adore fairies. Reading this always makes me really hungry. I'm still waiting for my mom to come home with breakfast. Oh...hunger. I reread the last chapter and I think it has gotten better. Before it seemed like you were trying too hard to show that this world was different than ours, but now it's more relax and things flow better. I am SO hungry. Even when I'm not reading about the candy house, Hansel's home town is filled with fruit and sweet smells. I think I'm gonna die from huger now. I want breakfast! >

So the witch is a solitary recluse I see who doesn't like brats. Quite understandable, seeing as I'm set for that way myself in oh, another eighty years! I sympathize with her. So, was she a femme fatale in her fascinating, by-gone youth?

Solid chocolate has a scent? Aside from the mental scent it exudes whenever you look at it for too long, tempting you to ingest it? Petty gummy bear? Oh how sweet - I'd love to eat it! This is the kind of old lady I want to be when I'm old - with an edible house and pet and always absolutely, utterly calm - but wicked-looking of course - with brats. Vira is a nice name - only though for some reason it reminds me of a, well, virus. Oh dear, is she Japanese? You use so many -sans and Japanesy names in your stories...

A lovely old lady to be sure. You go, girl! Sock him hard! Wine-eyed? It sounds like she's weeping blood all over the place. Just set me loose all over the garden, please, pretty please... Willie Wonka has nothing on this witch! The White Crown? Is that a species or a kingdom or an inn? Prince Garagu here! Oh, now I see what you meant saying they were interconnected...

But what happens to the children of royalty if they're treated like royalty?

She's quite motherly... and inspite of all that old-fashioned-ish lingo, she is witty... I'd love to have a grandmother like her! Hansel isn't too bad himself, he sounds fairly nice, if immature. Well, all boys grow out of that I suppose, in sixty or seventy years... you're brilliant at characterization!

I didn't quite understand Vira's method, though I loved her questions and his answers. I could practically imagine Hansel's look when she asked him if he preferred men or women - shock, horror, terror, you-are-insane-I'm-full-blooded-male! Fascinating magical theory...

So the witch has a dark side does she? A semi-cannibalistic mother to match a pure-cannibalistic daughter? Oh... enchanting! I'm absolutely hooked!

i love it; it's fun and descriptive and beautiful.

*fangirl-squeal*

You clever girl, you! You know what you need? You need a fangirl glomp. Unfortunately, I'm not close enough to glomp you. I'll just have to send you a cyberglomp and hope you get it.

*cyberglomp*

Erm, there isn't a whole lot I had an issue with, except the use of -san. I'd like to know what you have in mind...I'll send you an email with more details about my question, but it seems...a bit "off" to me.

Anyhow, I'm excited to read the next installment. You'd better finish this...it's a great story! Hurrah!

Your ecstatic fangirl,

Karin

I still really like the discriptiong of the house. I remember that from version one. It sounded like you had a blast typing it. I can't remember much from version one, but I don't think we got as much imformation . . .I think just came and spent the night and that was it.
I just realized something . . .I DON"T REMEMBER THE STORY OF HANSEL AND GRETEL Does one of them die? Because I thought Hensel was the one the witch wanted to eat . . . so what happened to Gretel? Did she die?
I love it. it's humerous and imagitive and just great,
I think I spelled some words wrong,but I'm too lazy to fix them . . . Or speaking of spelling errors. "The only the witch had with it was keeping it away from the fireplace, the curious little fool." That's the only funky sentence I could find. I think you forgot a word.