um... is roxy going to end up with will? I could see why veronica would be ** if she can sense that haha.

nice story! i really like it! and i am for sure that Will is absolutely smitten over Roxy, even if he may not realise it just yet... he will soon. anywayz, PLZ UPDATE SOON! =]

Please update! I really want to know what happens.

Oh. My. CARROT TOP! Don't ask... lol. I was checking my email and suddenly you had updated like, 5 new chapters! AHH!! CLIFFY! And that was a surprise too! Mike?? Weird. Well, anyways, great chapters, oh, and by the way, when James and Roxy were dancing at the party, you kinda mixed James name with Jared. Mistakes, mistakes, mistakes! O well, update soon!

~The Kindergartener

Seriously, you have to watch your grammar and spelling. Also, your information and plot line is a bit choppy.
And the saying about assume isn't technically from the show. Yes it was used, but it was made up a long time before that show came out.

I have a few of mistakes to pick out here, and some in the last chapter (not including all the grammar mistakes, and spelling.)

In the last chapter, you kept mixing up between James, and Jared.

Also, at one point you said "she found she was right in front of James. She was even more mortified to learn that Jason Anders, on whose floor she'd passed out the previous night, was behind her" So she's in front of two people at the same time? and you said his name was Jared not Jason.

Also, "Hey, it was only 8 percent below a pass" but she said she had a 47. I don't know about you, but a 50 is usually a pass, not a 55.


But otherwise good story. Watch your grammar and spelling. Try using spell check.

I like it.

This story just keep getting better and better! Please update soon; I can't wait to figure out what happens with Will and Roxy!

Who loves this story?!
ME: I DO!
AHH! Ah-mazing chapter! Update soon!
~The Kindergartener

I love this story!! Please update soon; I can't wait for more!

Sounds interesting, and I like your style of writing. Hope you update soon! Seriously.
~The Kindergartener :D

Good start, I'm excited to read more-- especially to meet the roomates. Update soon!