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| Slightly Bruised And Broken 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseomg omg omg i love it i love it i love it. i know who it is about unfortunately, and i know how you feel. but don't leave a friendship. i really like it! i could feel your rage getting more intense as it went on. i could picture you yelling this at the person! i love it |
| Any1there4me 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseAll I have to say is--Wow...seriously. This describes so many of the times I've had to deal with arguing with my parents (especially when they're wrong) and arguing with people who think they are benevolent when, in truth, they know nothing. Oh, and towards the middle you spelled conceited conceated, and at the botton you put then when I think you meant than. Besides that, beautiful and moving. This is what poetry should be like-able to withstand all tests and relate to anyone at some point in there lives! Jenn |
| Singingperson 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was really good. It made me think of a time when I felt the same way.. Anyways, it was great. |