Haha. Wow. I like this one. It's funny and I like reading pieces about the semi-awkward yet at the same time alluring and rampant nature of teenage sexuality. You did a good job. It's a little kinky, but hey, I can deal with that.

But how, you ask, did you know he was horny? I know how-it's the same way all girls figure out a guy is horny.

You looked down. Duh.

-thewhimsicalbard

this is...crazy.

made me laugh though

Its good for a Quick one-shot but A bit confusing...? Um Idk Intresting...

I liked it, it was really descriptive even though it was so short. Wish I could write like this...

Sexy, but if this is straight, I refuse to read further or tell you I love it...

*is confused* Why is this story labeled "humor"?

Otherwise, I like. Though the cigarettes would just give me a headache...

Hehehehe I love how it ended. This piece is pretty amazing just for the fact alone that you can write such things (like about the scab) with such honesty and... your writing doesn't feel inhibited, you know? Bravo.